Monthly Archives: August 2015

Coffee Might Tip The Scales

Chill winds and warm, sunny skies
Comfortable bed
A difficult dilemma


Facing Reality about Writing a Horror Story While You Watch

            The more I plan Bloodletting, the more I begin to think publishing it piece-by-piece as I write it is a bad idea. It needs to be much more orchestrated than the other two novels. Publishing one detail out of turn and finding out three posts later that the reader shouldn’t know that yet could dramatically change the overall effect of the plot – which could give you a bad experience with what I think could be a really good story. I don’t want to risk that if I don’t have to (and I don’t).
            Plotting out the details to slowly build each twist and turn to the level that the story deserves will be enough of a challenge (it’s a new level of intricacy for me), so Bloodletting is not going to be part of the daily post-as-I-write experiment for the foreseeable future. Sorry about that. I’ll probably post updates or more tidbits related to it later. I’ll definitely post something when I finish it (an announcement at least).
            I’m still not 100% sure this method will work for Deathwalker and Wind Town for the whole process, but I will keep updating those as part of the experiment for as long as it does work. And I will continue trying to write without modifying already-published scenes. After all, this is meant to stretch my brainpower and strengthen my writing skills. I have to make it at least somewhat different from how I usually write.
            On the plus side, having one fewer novel will free up more time for short stories, plays, and possibly more frequent novel updates (no promises). That said, sorry again for the change in plans, and thank you for your interest in these stories. I hope you enjoy them.


50 Word Short Story: Snooze

The bell rang for the next round. The fighter groaned, face planted firmly downward. “Get up,” her mind commanded. Even as the thought ended, the eyes fluttered heavily closed. Again, the bell rang. A hand fumbled for the only target that mattered. Enduring one last ring, she struck blindly. K.O.

Painting with Words

A brush of tongue
Or lightly dabbed - 
Shading colors of tone
And shaping sound.

The sharp stroke
As it strikes the teeth
In violent contrast
Until at last, the sounds
Are hung, displayed
To ears and mind

Art rarely signed


50 Word Story: The Long Journey

The soft light of dawn casts shadows over a desk covered with overflowing ashtrays and empty glasses. The basket next to it is piled high with crumpled paper balls. Shaking hands lift a thick stack of pristine papers, slide them into the manila envelope, and seal it. Ready to send. 

Ellipse

An incomplete thought,
Trailing off –
Suggesting,
Rather than stating:
A hint, a pause,
A doorway to possibility,
Or a sign of hesitation –

Or something left up to
Your imagination.

Tone

How can the same words
Sound so different?
Mean the opposite?
Hurt, then heal, then 
Hurt again?

Said once from love,
Once in anger.
One in pain:
One full of joy.

Yet the words never change.
English can be very
Strange.


The Power of Words

Some things cannot be put into words. Yet somehow, when they are, they become even more powerful.
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Bloodletting 1.1

            They kept talking about her like she wasn’t even there. Did they think she was deaf? Or just too stupid to know? Chloe grimaced with her back to the adults and pretended to be very interested in the magazines hanging on the boringly classy taupe wall. Though why anyone would care about celebrities’ sex lives, she didn’t know.
            “I fail to see the problem. After all, you recommended Doctor Manning personally.”
            “Yes, Elise is excellent. However, you should be aware-“
            “Good. It’s all settled then.”
            Hearing the crisp, final way Marilyn L. Kendrick, MD and PhD, dismissed the psychiatrist, Chloe rolled her eyes with an inaudible sigh and turned to go. No one argued with Dr. Kendrick.
            Silently, Chloe followed Marilyn’s perfect business suit out of the office and down the long hallway. A chic gray, the suit hugged a tiny waist and curves that looked like they belonged on a runway model. Even with her silky blonde hair in a prim bun, Dr. Kendrick drew glances with each click of her delicate heels.
            Chloe trudged behind in the shadow of that perfection. Her expensive black shoes made no noise on the fine wood floors, and she nervously plucked at the crisp button-up she’d been forced into until it hung as far from her body as possible. With each stare, her shoulders shrank until she was hunched in on herself, her eyes focused on the floor. Her droopy brown bangs hung limply over her face.
            “Posture.”
            Dr. Kendrick’s tone was mild and sweet. Still, the unexpected sound struck Chloe like a slap, and she flinched before quickly straightening her shoulders and raising her head. She swallowed against the knots in her stomach. Her hand closed compulsively in her pocket, and she relaxed slightly.
            “Sorry, Mother.”

This Is Really Strange…

I’m not sure what happened, but the Deathwalker addition was supposed to post on July 31st. In fact, I thought it already had posted – that’s what it showed me yesterday, so I’m really not sure what’s going on. 

Until I figure out what happened and whether I can get it updated, I’m going to pretend that it posted on the 31st like it was supposed to. Let’s go with that.